critiques for project 2

scale down text block a little.
make sure you add the word 'your'
in your text block.

in creative brief use more bullet points instead of full sentences.

Ok, the buttons on this I FORGET  exactly how to do my sections to rollover.

Someone post some clarity please.

The Perfect Cookie

I want to illustrate in pop up scroll over art ingredients and how to mix proper for a perfect cookie.

Client would be on a baking site of some kind.

Circles

Illustrate the circles of hell in Dante's Inferno.  Either for video the game site or a book club site.

Guitar Tone Design

I want the different parts of a guitar like pick-ups and strings plus using pedals and speakers to change and make a unique sound of your own. Prospective client would be someone like Guitar Center.

http://www.illustrationweb.com/artists/JamesGrover/view

James Grover really does a fine job with great detail in simplicity.

This is extremely awesome!

http://www.illustrationweb.com/artists/AlexandraBall/view

I really like this one's work. It's simple and colorful. In design it's sometimes hard not to be over elaborate with detail. I think a graphic is more effective in relaying a message if you tone it down a bit.

This is made for you.
This is made for me.
It's sweet and candied.
It's soft and cuddly.
It's for the month of February.
It's forever.
It's a memory.

other notables

http://www.daviddanioth.com/


http://www.peterbagge.com/

http://danielclowes.com/